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Written by Lolly on Dec 7, 2005

I LOVE the detail in this! I like how you'll dot the page for snow (verrrry nice touch!) and it's very colorful, even for a night picture! I love the ridges in the mountains, it makes them look so realistic! and that lamp! WHOa! I love the little cute white plants down there. It gives the picture an edge of mysticness to it. ^_^

I love the two ...er THREE chracters here. They're lineless, giving it a realistic edge as well, yet they still look very comical. OHHH! I love Kazzies necklace! very cleveer! Since she's likes music, and it's a halloweenish theme, SO it's a DEATH NOTE. That's very clever of you! The backgrond just amazes me beyond belief here! Two months on this? It was defiantly worth it! I wish I had that patience...then again, I kind of do the same thing, adding bit by bit to pictures. OHOH! I see the little white rabbit! And I like the little spider hanging off of Tobys hat. Very cute, and nice attention to detail!

I love that moon too! (actually..I love everything in this picture... X3) I see you've added craters and what not to it, giving it a realistic feel to it. Very very nice. The only thing I'd say is that the shape of the moon bugs me...but it's kind of hard to make circles in OC's, unless you have the premade circle tool. That ooooor it's like.. a 3/4 moon? :3 I DUNNO> XD Anyways, I'd say there's too many stars too, but I don't think that's a critique. It's nice how the sky isn't just one block of color, but a rainbow of blues in itself. Keep up the awome work Toby!

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	Tobias Dec 7, 2005
	Whoa, you sure love a lot about this picture ^-^; But anyhow, thanks a lot for your comment - actually the moon I made a little more detailed because that's what you mainly critiqued in the last few pictures, sooo - here you go, a nice moon with shadows and craters ^-^ It's actually supposed to be a 3/4 moon and not a full moon, but I agree, that's a little hard to see, and it looks a little squashed if you see it as a full moon X3 The many stars were actually on purpose - I want to make a puzzle out of it, so I wanted to make sure there's enough detail in the sky so you can tell the pieces apart (which was a problem I had with previous puzzles, where some pieces just looked completely alike, and you could only try and see whether they fit). And yush, I can imagine your drawings take you a long time too .. I usually don't work longer than a few hours every other day or so, which is why it quickly adds up and takes me a long time to complete, from pencil (I actually have the whole picture as a lightly-shaded pencil drawing) to the computer coloured picture ^-^